All Comments on 'Janice's First Time:Dasfenster'

by fl_cuck

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Boring

Another stupid slut wife and guy who doesn't care.

Stupid , cliche, boring.

I don't want to be mean, but why don't you use your creativity to write something fun to wad that makes the reader happy the spent the time on you story. This is just some skank who likes to fuck around. Boring, move to Florida and you'll see them overtime you go out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Liking watch paint dry - utterly boring and stupid!

Is this your best author?

taremostaremosover 13 years ago
God the neg. commentors on here are annoying

It was a fine short story. Ending could've been better but it was hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
This is a bit discombobulated

To me there is a story trying to come out..

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

A fine short story? That commenter must have been reading something other than this cuck and whore shit.

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