by SubMeIn
Welcome to Literotica, SubMeIn. I like how you express her simultaneous desires and trepidations, and having her write what she wants is a nice touch. Your writing could benefit from an editor to catch some grammar and tense errors, but not bad for a first story. Continue writing, and I hope you have more to share.
Hot story. I hope to find a take charge man to dominate me & make my fantasy become reality! I’m wet just thinking about it.