All Comments on 'Janine Gets What She Wanted'

by SubMeIn

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visioneervisioneerabout 5 years ago

Welcome to Literotica, SubMeIn. I like how you express her simultaneous desires and trepidations, and having her write what she wants is a nice touch. Your writing could benefit from an editor to catch some grammar and tense errors, but not bad for a first story. Continue writing, and I hope you have more to share.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
That’s What I Want Too!

Hot story. I hope to find a take charge man to dominate me & make my fantasy become reality! I’m wet just thinking about it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
damn

Mmmmmm princesses pussy is sopping...... I need a daddy....

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23-year-old reader, writer, and editor with an interest in light BDSM.