All Comments on 'Jared and Katie - Siblings'

This was a good story. Well thought out, well paced, and sexy as hell. What made you think of making Haley so controlling?

I'm glad he broke up with the gf, I liked the sister way better. Pretty hot near the end, it was very enjoyable

This was a really well written story. I really enjoyed it! *****

"Jared and Katie waited and while they looked up at her, slipped the black thong bikini down her legs. Her pussy was bare.

"Your shaved!" Katie exclaimed in surprise.

"Yeah, we both like it like that, don't we Jared?" Hayley replied.

"Yeah, uh huh," Jared agreed simply pretty much agreeing with anything at that point."

"THIS IS JUST PLAIN CHILDISH, EVEN THE LAST SENTENCE I QUOTED -- AGREEING WITH ANYTHING. SOUNDS LIKE A PITIFUL MALE WITH LOW SELF ESTEEM THAT CAN'T SEEM TO FIND A GIRL HAIRY PUSSY"

That was a lot of writing for a 1 star rating.

The 'never havel I ever' is as far as I went 'cuz this story was just too juvenile to enjoy....

Hi Kinki. As good as it gets. More please. Continue the story. We need a chapter 2 and 3 and 4 and ...

shaved pussy ruined whatever this might have been. Blech.

Extremely hot story that is sensual and sexually stimulating. Definitely a 5 star. Have you considered a sequel?

You tend to attract people who get upset about 6-page incest smut for some reason haha. I loved the story. Would love to see a longer one about these two

I love your stories! But in this one, the first half before the breakup was more compelling than the second. Hayley pushing Katie's boundaries bit by bit was incredibly hot and I kept wondering what was coming next. But after the breakup, the story fell back to a more pedestrian sibling story that was nowhere near as special and lost the "horny reluctance" theme that made Katie so interesting at the start.

Loved it. Please can you change Jared's name to remove the association with one of Trump's idiot sons?

You've done it again Nikki a lovely tale about two young people falling in love whilst discovering what life and lust is all about. Lovely.

Five stars.

I love bald cunts, I don't like hairs in my mouth, not even my own.

The only bad part about this story is that it ended ...... Great story

There is something fundamentally wrong with this sentence: "Then she felt the pulse of his dick as it shot its load of hot cum deep up her anal cavity and squealed."

Naturally, I just happened to take a mouthful of water as I read that sentence. I'm still trying to get the image of a squealing dick out of my mind.

I was hoping they would move out of their house and live together--and continue the story!

Another story I liked reading.( I am not into veggies)

Gave you ****

Great story! Thank you