All Comments on 'Jasmine Takes Charge Ch. 01'

You liked, "Power"! Even though it was homosexual*, which you are, you still get 1 star.

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*"Bi" is just a cover, once you start munching muffs, lady, you are a homosexual!

While I respect your endeavors to bring Gor from the books into a more modern day, you need to do some more proof-reading both in editing and flow of the story. It seemed like it was hopping from one place to another and I was unsure of the gender of the sub for a long period adding to my confusion. The situation with the alphabet agencies reference just made it more confusing and some back story or information would have helped more.