by vinceh23
Why would you waste your own time, much less our time, with inane sh*t like this?
How old are you, 12????????
LEAVE WRITING TO WRITERS!
Standing in front of a naked wet pussy, with his dick in his hand, why in the hell didn't he bend over and suck all of the sweet nectar out of those sweet lips? Is he retarded, of just stupid, to give up a chance like that? Oh well I hope to read that he finally gets to nail that obviously wanting woman.
It's a better story than the others give you credit for. Don't listen to them and keep writing. It could be longer with more build up/tension.
Rock on with panties
You need to finish this story vince please let his mother show him the job of sexing!.
Not a bad start but it would be nice if you would take it up again and let Jason's mother teach him more with a lot of hands on instructions. This was good enough for me to go check out some of your other stories. Thanks