All Comments on 'Jason's Story Ch. 18'

Good writing about two very selfish destructive people, may they rot in hell.

come together intending to be faithful to each other, to support each other, to cherish each other... and most even "forsake all others" in front of dozens, only to find themselves not able to go on. <p>

it's hard to believe two people like Jason and Nigha could truly love one another, when the reason for their coming to gether and having kids together, was true deceit and adultery (on Nigha's part) and rape (on Jason's part) that, during delirious fucking moments, they think they have truly found "love". <p>

I've just saw a short video clip on the NY Times about a captain, woman in her twenties, having had a relationship with a male colleague, since they started basic training together. of course, she said they eventually "fell in love" and so they obviously continued their sexual relations. apparently, the sex continued --- mostly on the demand of the male's part --- even AFTER she had become (1) "uncomfortable" with his sexual demands and (2) she found out he was/is married. <p>

he, of course, continued to stalk her, harass her, and basically demand sex and she pretty much gave in, because, she said to the NY Times reporter, it was "easier" to put her head down, as they learned in the army, and submit to his persistency, which often times bordering sexual predatory acts. and this was a tough army captain in IRAQ, fighting along tens of thousands of others! <p>

so, she never complained to higher up officials. even after she had done her tour of duty. it was not until the army had come to her, to notify her that THEY had been inquiring about her colleague male friend WHOM THEY KNEW she must have had sexual relations with; they were inquiring because OTHER FEMALES had brought sexual harassment complaints against him. <p>

it was only NOW, after 6-7 years had transpired that this said woman, former army captain revealed she was sexually harassed and RAPED by this person, this former male colleague with whom she had trained and with whom she had had sexual relations in the past. <p>

the point here is this: women, many women, are just too wishy-washy and they are raped, by men they know, colleagues some of whom are pure colleagues and some of whom were formerly sexual partners. <p>

and YET they, these female, are so into this "love" thing, this "Oh, I could change him" nonsense, they never think about OTHERS VIOLATING their bodies, since it is easier to "go with the flow" and if the "flow" happens to be pressure on them, then they just have to accept it and turn it into a "positive thing," perhaps even turn it into a "love," as this story about Jason and Nigha here, where Jason designed to rape Nigha, to maker her his, his "true love" and she was raped and then eventually agreed with him, she couldn't live without him; she would have his kids and destroy --- unwillingly, she said --- her marriage to a good, faithful man who cherished her for over 20 years... <p>

in the "real world," what kind of chances do cheaters have --- as a long, enduring foundation to build a life on --- when their reason for coming together was one violating another, even if they (one or the other or even both) put it in the name of deep and true love and "soul mate," etc? <p>

any way, I found Bria, the sister to be irritating and a ditzy sort of a character who could never complete any serious thought or sentence...

these two asses still around?? Kudos to your writing skills and story that I keep getting drawn back into their hateful lives. I know there aren't always happy endings for everyone and lust seems to trump love in most cases. That lust turns to love and all be damned in the name of love, but these two characters were just foul to me. Jason with blatant disregard and without any qualms, pursues a supposedly happily married woman. He starts out their sexual relationship with a kind of pseudo-rape thing by breaking into her house, pretending to be her husband, and fucking her, and she ends up trusting and loving this guy?!! I guess there was something inherently wrong with her marriage for her to fall for this borderline pyscho, obsessive, weirdo. That something wrong was HER. These two freaks were made for each other. Were we supposed to feel sorry for her 'cause her pretty face got scarred up and will forever be a reminder of her nefarious actions? That she has nightmares? Or that she's oh so guilt ridden about her boys? Not really, especially since she gets to go on her merry little way with her new man and new twins. The funny thing is that women seem to be the biggest advocates of showing love with your actions not just your words and despite all her verbal claims her actions showed she didn't give a shit about her family, only her personal needs. Brett and the boys are better off without her. Let her play mommy with her new family and at least give Brett the hope of finding someone new and decent who won't make a habit of falling in love with every guy that gives her the dick. Can't wait to see how you FINALLY wrap this "love" story up. Hopefully it will be soon so I can finally say goodbye to these two selfish fuckers. Thanks for the entertainment.

If it had be the man to do this in other stories everyone would be up in arms, but because it is the woman there is a double standard. I don't believe she is a victim but a willing participant and how is it you focus so much on her and the twins. What about her older children or are they no longer of consequences because she is going to end up with Jason. I still gave you a 100 because you are a good writer, but I would like to see you write something else.

i hate this story, i hate these characters, but i like your writing.Could you please end this horrible story and write about something else.

how people rate stories on the "morality" presented within the story instead of the quality of the writing. You are such an excellent writer. I really feel the pain and love the characters have for each other. Thanks so much for finishing the story and bringing closure. I hope you will continue to post your writings on literotica even after you complete this story.

I'm really surprised that people are so up in arms about this story. I come to this site, knowing full well, what some people find erotic I sometimes find odd and creepy. Sometimes, I'm surprised to find that an author can put into written words, eroticism in something I would have never imagined as erotic. While these characters have their issues, in the relm or what I've read here, they don't seem so far out there. This is fiction, after all. But maybe the comments mean the author has done a particularly good job of breathing life into the characters. I mean, if she hadn't, no one would care, right? Good job EroticLitKitty! Keep writing!

The only reason I read any of this was to see if you did anything to salvage this train wreak you created, you did not. Dispictable people doing ugly things to other people is ugly, no matter how it's written, she is a lying cheating slut who wreaked a lot of lives and Jason is a rapist scumbag home wreaker who could care less what happens to her family, yet you try to make them romantic, you failed. I won't read anymore, too much bad karma.

I'm really glad you continued. Although this story contains flawed characters doing some immoral things, it is your story.

Those who "hate" the characters or the story, shouldn't read it. Simple as that.

I enjoy your writing and I look forward to reading more (this story) and future ones.

I'm so glad EroticLitKitty that you are back writing and finishing this magnetic story. Nevermind your naysayers, if they haven't figured out what this story is about by now and decided against their freedom of choice not to read it, that's on them. I mean this is the 18th installment people, c'mon! I for one enjoyed it,and appreciate how you illustrated the complexities of the characters' dynamics and feelings, especially with Jason and Nigha. Even though it's clear these two are destined to be together I like how you left the possibilities open for anything to happen.

I am so glad you are back. I used to check for updates and was shocked when I realized Nigha and Jason were back. Yes they are flawed, but it is your story and it is life. People aren't perfect they are flawed. Not sure I understand the people who read this work and some others and complain that the people are cheating or destroying others lives...dayum it's a story and a very good one at that!!!!!!! You go gurl!!!

I am glad you are back! Please don't take another 10 months to write the next chapter.

Don't listen to the other comments. You are a terrific writer. I love this story line and look forward to another posting very soon.

To the negative people, this is fiction, not real life. Get a grip!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! I've been stalking this board for months looking for an update for this story. I absolutely love your lead characters! Flaws and all! And don't let the haters get you down about the "perceived" absence of morality in this story. Newflash to the naysayers......in the real world, people are not perfect! Anyway, this was an stellar update. Lapsed, but nonetheless excellent.

Its finally up!! I missed these two and the twisted, tangled web they wove. I really hope they end up together and soon. And some of these readers need to chill. If u dnt like the story why are you reading it? U knew in the first few chapters Nigha cheated and fooled around with Jason. Nothing's changed. EroticLitKit didnt come back to say "sike. That was all a dream folks." yet u still came back some 15 or so chapters later to bash the storyline. Get a clue guys :) anyways...can't wait for the nxt chapter girlie.

**lilmami07**

I've been waiting on this to come back too. I loved it. I don't care what anyone says I love these two together. It's fantasy and I can live with that!!

i have been anxiously waiting for the next chapter. i love nigha and jason and hope they end up together. although their falling in love was a complete clusterfuck (one of my favorite words!) it's obvious how much and how deeply they care for each other. bravo EroticLitKitty!

It's chapter 18...it's been fairly clear since chapter one who the story is about(it's called JASON'S STORY). It's about Nigha's love for Jason and all the upheaval it's caused. If you don't like the fact that Nigha was married that's understandable....but there's no way for the author to change the story to fit your needs. It just isn't the story for you. And that's ok...it's a free story, feel free to click the x on the side and keep it moving.

I'm just glad she came back and didn't forget about the story like I feared. I've read enough romance to think I know your endgame. Even if I'm wrong I truly look forward to the ride, now that you're back. Keep up the good work and stay true to your story.

These characters haunt me as if they are real. The emotion you evoke and make me feel is incredible. It is too soon to tell where they will end up. I never fully understood Nigha's thinking until it happened to me. I remember reading Jason's story and thinking it was simple choose Jason! Now, not so much! How do you leave behind all of the memories and history you have shared and created throughout the years? Will the new love last and sustain you both? If it fails where does that leave you? So the in between--denying oneself both seems like the only fair choice--but life is not fair--it harsh, honest, and if we are lucky forgiving by offering a second chance. The question is to rebuild what is old, safe, comfortable and true or build upon the new, exciting, and exhilarating?

The fact that your writing has caused such a varied and loud response from readers is great! It is great because you have told a story that causes people to react and to feel. I personally think people are taking the actions of a fictional character way too seriously, but your work as a writer can not be diminished. Not everything is going to be a sanitized tweet or twitter post on your facebook! This is one writer's story of many stories to be told. You won't always agree with the topic or the content, but if a writer can make me want to read something that i normally would never want to read because i have to see what happens--they have done their job above and beyond. For me a greater draws me into the story making it impossible to leave without knowing the end. Well done. I love your work!

Thank you so much for this chapter , i love this story . I so hope jason is the one in the end.

Their are people this selfish and self centered in the world, I'm just lucky I don't know any, nor do I want to read about them, I'll skip the rest.

it's Jason's story that doesn't mean we have to like him so don't knock people because they don't think that rape and adultery make for the best romance ever. Plus the author's been submitting on here long enough to where I'm sure she's developed a thick enough skin to accept criticism, good or bad. It kind of comes with the territory. Opinions are like assholes, everyone has one. Like previous posters have mentioned the author rocks enough that people keep coming back for more whether they like the characters or not, and like any good story you want to see how everything works out in the end. It's a given Skank and Stalker Boy will end up together but what about the ex, Brett, and the brats, both sets? Granted it's not their story but they're part of the story so what kind of closure do they get? Like my favorite soap opera, which coincidentally this drags on like, I can't wait to see how it all works out.

I LOVE this story. It's real. Real life isn't pretty and packaged, it's harsh and sometimes ugly, and we do the best we can to find some happiness in it. I think the fallibility of these characters is very honest. I love their vulnerability. Your writing is phenomenal. You could publish this. I hope for a happy ending with Jason and Nigha. Most great writers push the envelope. And not every story is for every person. Please keep writing! Thanks for this chapter.

I have loved to story from the start. I do hope the Nigah and Jason end up togather since that is what this story is about finding your true love and they seem to have found it in eachother. I say for those who this story does not touch keep stepping and don't comment. Keep up good writing Kitty

for continuing this story... I've been checking back regularly anxious to know the outcome. I love the way in which you've developed this storyline and the characters...great writing...hope I don't have to wait as long for the next instalment. As for the morality squad...last time I checked this site is called Literotica which hosts whole sections of morally questionable fictitious stories...this story is quite tame in comparison. If you can't handle the heat get out of the kitchen!

i have been waiting so long for this chapter. and you made me so happy. i know they will be together. sooooooooo happy. you inspired me to finish my story with Arabella. I'll be posting it soon i hope. and you do the same with chapter 19. love love loved it! :D

-your friendly online stalker

I'd love to see a violent and unhappy end to Jason, he's a rapeist, lier, and all around scumbag, lets see someone take away everything he loves in this world and see how he reacts, oh, he just loves himself,and of course married pussy, well, there you go, write about that.

People this is a STORY. The stuff that happens in everyday married life is 10 times worse than anything she's written. Get a life. Saying the characters are "despicable" or should "rot in hell" is ridiculous. Good job with your writing. I'm a big fan.

As always with these two sexy!!!!!!! I hope they finally get together. They both deserve to be happy.

Forget the naysayers!!! Keep up the great work and please don't wait too long before you give us another update.

I just read this entire series and I adore Jason and Brett. Wow. I think its understandable how she could fall in love with two men. Its sad that it happened while she was married to one and had kids, but c'mon, who wouldn't love Jason? And I agree. PEOPLE it is a STORY! Relax. Find a character to love. ;)

I enjoy your writing. Very descriptive, entertaining, and the scenes are hot. Keep up the great work and your writing.

Great update so happy to have seen it looking forward when you update again soon just love these two together.

I have just read the series. DAMN GOOD!!! Can't wait for the next installment!!!

oh my wow!!! we neeeed some new installments def... you cant end this series, leavin us hangin like that!!! keeep it comin :)

Can't wait for the next installment!!! Please hurry ; )

Please hurry it's been ages! :)

this was a very well written. it was extremely difficult not to hate nyhia. poor brett and the boys. i can't say i would wish this on anybody.

OK, I'm new to this story,LoVE it to BITS..... just found the last 18 chapters with a pomise of 20... that was Dec09.......I need to know how it ends!!! PLEASE FINISH.....

Great story! I'm so happy they're together. I haven't been able to stop reading .

I love this story so much. I just found it. I finished it in one day, It was so good. I kept reading chapters at a time around my work.

It's been 8 months since last update.

Please finish the last few chapters.

This story was so well written. I think the author did a wonderful job. On that note I like to say I have no respect for people who cheat therefor I lost all respect for Nigha. Since it seems that she a Jason will end up together I hope her sons choose to live with Brett and all three of them never talk to her again and that Brett finds some else he and the boys will be happy with. Let her be content with what she thought was worth destroying their lives over. As for Jason I hope someone intentionally set out to take his wife and destroy his family like he did to Brett.

The author you say? Yes, she's still around and lost her inspiration for a while, but after reading some of the excellent works out there (PepperPace and calibeachgirl being the most recent inspirations) and revisiting some of the sweetest comments ever; I'm writing again. I've got another story that I'm working on that I feel compelled to finish before posting (for all those that stuck with me for 4 years and 18 chapters of this one only to be kept in the dark for over a year) and then it's back to my first love, Jason's Story. Check out my blog to see the other stories that have been occupying my mind and let me know what you think :-)

Thanks so much you guys and much love for 2011!

Kitty

http://sexyauthorkitty.wordpress.com/

By far my favorite story on this site. Please finish I have to know what happens!!

One of my top 5 favourite stories on this site. Please update.

if jason's so perfect why did his first girlfriend cheat on him????

and try as you might to defend your lead characters, your 'hero' (i use the term mighty loosely) is a douchebag who broke up a happy home, and your 'heroine' is a lying cheating cunt....

i can't believe the high ratings your stories are getting.... i don't see how any cheating is justified, and this story has offered none, absolutely none at all.... people who 'are in love two people at the same' are liars.... when you love someone, you love them heart and soul, or you don't....

yes, it is that black and white....

no greys....

take it from someone who's seen both sides of cheating....

it is wrong....

SJR....

I don't approve of spouses cheating or people going after someone that's married but, in life things happen. I'm enjoying this story because it's real life and I've known some that have been in crazy situations. This is real life and thank you for putting pen to paper and expressing it to us. I just have one question could you please finish it???

Kit, I gotta tell ya, I have no idea how you're gonna finish this, and I do not envy you!!

From one author to another, I so understand how it is to be too busy with work, kids, relationships, etc. to write. And the truth of it is sometimes we lose our mojo and CAN'T write.

I wish you good luck with the conclusion and I will do a butt-naked dance to the literary gods so that you're able to finish. We (uh...based on the comments, SOME of us) will be waiting! :-)

Loving this story again and the comments are just as entertaining!!!!! I am glad you got tough skin.

Kit, I have laughed,cried,cussed,fussed and discussed,this story! Thank you for being one hell of a great author! You deserve all the great reviews and if anyone has a problem,tell them to kick rocks!If I could give you 10 stars,I would plus some!

You know how to describe what a guy wants to hear PERFECTLY and probably the same with the opposite side. I'm totally enthralled! Nice reversal on her waking dream and him trying to be her "voice of reason"--but I loved that she kept after him that time. :)

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