by sensualcaring
Thanks a lot, now you made me cry. That was one of the most heartfelt, sad, loving stories I have read. Thank you very much.
Very well written, captivated me throughout. What an actual 'loving yet romantic' story. It left me believing that Sara will forever be in both Evan & Jayne's life to the end of time. I notice only a few grammatical errors however, the story flowed leaving me with a hope of "perhaps someday it could happen for me".
Jynny
You started making me cry about the last part of page one. Eyes still wet as I type this comment. Absolutely beautifully written. A story of true love. Dang, I So wish to be Jayne lol.
Miss Kira Bangkok
Wonderful. Yes I cried. It hit pretty close to home. One of my favorite stories.