All Comments on 'Jayne's World Pt. 20'

Like night and day; hesitate to say I love it because the one side of Jayne is not believable but your story/your fantasy. Nevertheless the contrast you created is stark/dramatic to your credit. Liked the reflection on the men in Jayne’s life at the moment — intriguing group/intriguing young woman.

Hate the rape aspect and undertones from Mickey, but your story telling give credence to the situation that makes it a great and hot read