All Comments on 'Jayne's World Pt. 21'

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MigbirdMigbird7 months ago

Jayne’s world is expanding/evolving in erotically interesting way thanks to your style.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Oh my ...... please continue this......

AndyAndrewsAndyAndrews7 months ago

Terrific story, Jayne. What a fascinating character you have created and you tell her story so well. I loved this chapter. Thanks and keep them coming.

Wiz1002Wiz10027 months ago

Jaynes world is definitely growing into the more “adult” world of glamour modelling, porn and possible prostitution.

Her “lessy” side also seems to be blossoming, although I’m not sure how her and James will continue in the medium term as their paths seem to be diverging from wheee they were a few chapters ago.

Still, a fabulous chapter in a great series. Keep it up

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