All Comments on 'Jay's Loelife Ch. 15'

by Mrsgnomie

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sm1982sm1982almost 2 years ago

Look at Aidan easily winning over his Lowen as he did his Seamus <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I want to be their friend. Really am enjoying how Jay’s unconditional love has transformed loe

dnsontndnsontnalmost 2 years ago

“He's content because he's part of your life, not part of your life because he's content.” Can’t quite put my finger on it, but if this sentiment, this chicken-or-the-egg logic, could be applied to Loren’s trauma it would, perhaps, help him heal. Or not? What do I know…

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

great, sensitive passages, convincing characterizations, great style.Please continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

They're really doing great on doing with potential clashes like that one. I like it! Can relate a lot with Loren when he's talking about Aidan playing the game. It's nice to have them be all focused and not play like crazy with games, but at the same time, I have the urge to grab the device and play the game because of how bad they are playing it (which is understandable because of their age, but still.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Also, typical haters on Sven that always don't type when they got positive info on the character in future chapters, glad you feel silly on him now, eh?

Funny how those comments would always go "ew, fuck this character for potentially ruining the main relationship" when they barely did anything. Turn out the guy feels embarassed because, news flash, he never knew that Loren and Jay are dating. I hope this is another moment that should be drilled into your brains: Never make hasty assumptions so early on when we barely have enough information in the series, or even in real life. Even if you ignore it, everyone will know how stupid you were when you went all gungho on your standpoint without any evidence backing it up.

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