All Comments on 'Jealousy'

How do you manage to write a story that is very dark, and yet lighthearted, and bottom line, entertaining, all at once? You even threw in a fillip of irony. I think every high school has a Cherrie in it, as well as an Annabel. You exaggerated, of course, but that's what made the story great. The budding prostitute angle was a bit over the top, but what the hell, right? What a brilliant story to wake to! Thank you, 5* ~~ JBE

Good but I’ve read this one before even though it’s meant to be a brand new story. Recycling?

It's "might have", not "might of".

Meh !

Pointless, scattered and ridiculous