All Comments on 'Jean's Awakening Ch. 01'

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ccs29745ccs29745over 1 year ago

Leaving us in suspense like that. Great start, can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow what a great start!! I can't wait to read chap two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Too short. It's a good beginning, too bad you didn't finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

great story

Bargyn1Bargyn1over 1 year ago

Can't wair foe Ch. 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fuck yes, spot on. Had me holding my breath right through it.

Sometimes less is more and this is IT.

Perfect length, perfect cliffhanger. 5*

old_n_fat_is_beautifulold_n_fat_is_beautifulover 1 year ago

Delicate but sensuous! Great job!

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

****Great teasing start! Looking forward to future submissions. Thanks for sharing.

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1948 Natal Year. 1968 Draftee. 1976 B.S. 1978 M.A. Four decades as a professional planner. Free thinker, part of the sexual revolution, enjoyer of women, strictly heterosexual.

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