by TheGraduate88
Leaving us in suspense like that. Great start, can't wait for more.
Wow what a great start!! I can't wait to read chap two.
Too short. It's a good beginning, too bad you didn't finish it.
great story
Can't wair foe Ch. 2!
Fuck yes, spot on. Had me holding my breath right through it.
Sometimes less is more and this is IT.
Perfect length, perfect cliffhanger. 5*
Delicate but sensuous! Great job!
****Great teasing start! Looking forward to future submissions. Thanks for sharing.