All Comments on 'Jean's Diary: First Time'

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LustyScribeLustyScribeabout 4 years ago
Beautiful story of first love!

You've done a great job of capturing the emotional rollercoaster of first love, combined with the sometimes awkward twists of gender-bending discovery. Very well done, and I eagerly await the next pages of the diary!

Private4BrendaPrivate4Brendaabout 4 years ago
Wow! You Had Me Hanging On Every Word...

Loved it! Loved the build-up and the emotion. So refreshing to read a decent story rather than all "Sissy this" and "Sissy that". Please keep writing, I'd love to read where this goes.

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