All Comments on 'Jeep Hair Don't Care Pt. 02'

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Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 3 years ago

I love that you did a sequel but I think you missed an opportunity. Your first story left the audience at the end of August with the two lovers saying their last good-byes. This story jumps back in time and tries to fill the gap you left last time. I would have liked it better if you kept the story moving in time and how their relationship evolved. Thanksgiving/Christmas holidays trying to fool around without family finding out, are they truly in love, how do they move forward and/or are the just fuck buddies? All possible...

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 3 years ago

Story is seriously drifting at this point - where are we headed?

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