All Comments on 'Jennie - Painting the Condo'

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chiefhalchiefhalover 2 years ago

I love women that know what they want and are not afraid to ask/demand for it!

LargoKittLargoKittover 2 years ago

In my stories I often forget to spend some time on what the women have chosen to wear. You do this well. Choosing the piece and thinking about its effect on a partner is a turnon for the character and the reader. I usually stay away from bra sizes. Comparisons to fruit work better for me. But you use them as something both gals know about each other and that has strength. Nice fun with the painting.

creativeandfuncreativeandfunover 1 year ago

Such a yummy, well written story.

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