All Comments on 'Jennifer and Slave Sarah'

i really really loved this ,such wonderfully written and the details :-))

It was so great i finished reading the whole story this morning and left my household on hold haha ;-)

Only one downside to this,....... i could only give 5 stars :P should have been10! at least

i hope to read more of You ! :-))

Best regards Peter

Anyone who says consent isn't hot is doing it wrong. This was an awesome story.

I would normally not read such a long bdsm consensual story, but the title got my attention and the wrting is quite excellent. Yes, I would prefer a bit more non con, but for a fine effort and many hot, non-repetitive moments, you deserve the 5.

Like that the narrator is not crazy, as other commenter sent, consensual and hot. Ending felt a bit off. Nicely drawn out. Odd with the prostitution license thing and that whole angle, bur a good character story overall.

Great story and characters. A fantastic read that I couldn’t put down. If the ending was more explained and walked through day to day, and the bondage and sex scenes were more detailed, I feel like this could be a legitimate book.

Really enjoyed this. An excellent erotic read all the way through xx

LONG, BUT KEPT MY INTEREST!

Very well told and written, but I would have liked there to be more serious BDSM (since that IS the category its in), or at least more details about what bondage and punishment there was. If further writing includes that I'll be anxious to follow along. Perhaps breaking a story of this length into two or three separately published chapters might attract more readers. A story I wrote for Literotica (Millville) was published in 33 chapters, each only about 1/3 as long as this one, but each chapter containing erotic and tittilating stuff to entice readers to look for more.

Keep up the good writing!

Fascinating. I agree with the comment that the ending was abrupt. Although details became scarce by the end, it seems that Jennifer has fully taken on her role as Domina, which is hopeful.

I would be interested in more, to see how Jennifer and her slave(s) do. In particular, what will Jennifer do once she graduates?

Wow! What a story.

I agree that the ending arrived abruptly. I guess that RachaelJane was exhausted by the constant gameplay, imagined as it was. Perhaps an epilogue - dropping in on the household some years later, would be fun?

I thoroughly enjoyed the read, and I join with others in appreciation of the style and imagery. The author is concerned with storytelling, and the pacing of the narrative is well judged.

I'd appreciate a little more physical description of the characters - their physiques and their grooming preferences. However, having also read RachaelJane's lesbian island tale, I rather think that she intends that the reader should conjure these particulars to their preference . How refreshing!