All Comments on 'Jennifer at St. Ciels Ch. 1'

Good set up! really sexy. Maybe a little more background on the first 3 years of school would be helpful. Did they look up to the seniors? want to be them? disgusted by them...

The school rules need not to be this odd, there are so many other ways to accomplish the procedules you needed, make them more reasonable would make the readers felt more convinced. Even more excited by the anticipation. don't you think?