All Comments on 'Jennifer's Innocence Ch. 03'

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snkbittinsnkbittinalmost 12 years ago

keep em cumming..great job

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
wha t a dumbass story

swo you're like the rest of these stupid ass cuckolds.....you wnat your wife to be a turnstyle, everybody gets a turn

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Actually, author is "doctor don't know"

Pathetic attempt. Typical Literotica trash story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
truth in what he said

was very hot reading it and it was the right thing . If you do know what your doing you can make any woman go nuts by just eating and fingering her kitty. most guys don't learn this but the ones who do will allways please their mates. lets have the next parts very soon dose she get teamedby afew guys

9500mesa9500mesaalmost 12 years ago
patience

the story needs to slow down, treat the story like Archie did Jen's pussy, clean up the word usage also.

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 12 years ago
Getting better

But Mesa has a neat point. (The tale was hot before, getting to sizzling!)

Question authority (and experience!)

But listen CAREFULLY to the answer!

Lucky the Old, Fat Bull came along!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
my god

what a bunch of crap and the sickos lap it right up making it even more sicken.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

WTF? Chapters 1 and 2 were about them having fun. chapter 3 is just bullshit. How sad for the writer it had a good story then fucked it up big time.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpetealmost 12 years ago
Les than terrible....

...the author must be bi-polar...sad....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Crap.

She talks like a 9yr old and not an adult. This belongs in a different site you ficking perv.

Greyhair61Greyhair61almost 12 years ago
Hmmm.

I really liked chapters 1 & 2, but you lost me on 3. Not fun anymore.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Was a good story but took a bad turn. Maybe ch 4 can return to the original direction.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Over

I had this author's home page in my favorites until this chapter.... This just got stupid.

KronnKronnalmost 12 years ago
Absolutely love the series

Hawt exciting and arousing! Keep it up!

johnny1705johnny1705over 10 years ago
More, pease!

Please finish this great story!

bioman57bioman57over 7 years ago
Good story but needs to be finished

I enjoyed the story, found a few English error but not bad. Please finish your story. It is left hanging

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Trying

Pimp ads bastard still trying to make her a whore, but author , thankfully, quit writing. Good riddance.

Buster2UBuster2Uover 1 year ago

And before Archie leaves he sticks his 3-1/2" dick into her sweet hot pussy and gets his nut as well. 5 stars thanks for sharing.

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