by doctorknow
swo you're like the rest of these stupid ass cuckolds.....you wnat your wife to be a turnstyle, everybody gets a turn
Pathetic attempt. Typical Literotica trash story.
was very hot reading it and it was the right thing . If you do know what your doing you can make any woman go nuts by just eating and fingering her kitty. most guys don't learn this but the ones who do will allways please their mates. lets have the next parts very soon dose she get teamedby afew guys
the story needs to slow down, treat the story like Archie did Jen's pussy, clean up the word usage also.
But Mesa has a neat point. (The tale was hot before, getting to sizzling!)
Question authority (and experience!)
But listen CAREFULLY to the answer!
Lucky the Old, Fat Bull came along!
what a bunch of crap and the sickos lap it right up making it even more sicken.
WTF? Chapters 1 and 2 were about them having fun. chapter 3 is just bullshit. How sad for the writer it had a good story then fucked it up big time.
She talks like a 9yr old and not an adult. This belongs in a different site you ficking perv.
I really liked chapters 1 & 2, but you lost me on 3. Not fun anymore.
Was a good story but took a bad turn. Maybe ch 4 can return to the original direction.
I had this author's home page in my favorites until this chapter.... This just got stupid.
I enjoyed the story, found a few English error but not bad. Please finish your story. It is left hanging
Pimp ads bastard still trying to make her a whore, but author , thankfully, quit writing. Good riddance.
And before Archie leaves he sticks his 3-1/2" dick into her sweet hot pussy and gets his nut as well. 5 stars thanks for sharing.