All Comments on 'Jenny & Josh Ch. 01'

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marklionmarklionalmost 15 years ago
Great First Chapter!!!!

That was a great first Chapter day you wrote in this new series. I like how you've expanded the characters of Josh, Jenny, Sarah and Amanda in the first Chapter. I also like how the girls came to Josh to ask him to impregnated either Sarah or Amanda and maybe both. I can hardly wait for the next chapter to see what you do with who is going to become pregnant between Amanda and Sarah?

Captain MidnightCaptain Midnightalmost 14 years ago
Question?

Didn't Jenny have a hysterectomy after Vicki was born? Did I miss something when she has two more children?

TigersmanTigersmanalmost 9 years ago
Nice

This was a really nice story. In this day and age I can easily seeing this taking place. The sex scenes were done just right. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Vegas over tanned old geezer fantasy

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