All Comments on 'Jenny & Josh Ch. 01'

Certain words indicate the author to be UK? - "Some men are turned off by a pregnant woman's figure..." Place me solidly in that camp as I am pregnancy adverse - Now as the story progresses it is beginning to become too saccharine - And, where's the incest since he hasn't had sex with his daughter as of yet? -

Vegas over tanned old geezer fantasy

This was a really nice story. In this day and age I can easily seeing this taking place. The sex scenes were done just right. Keep writing.

Didn't Jenny have a hysterectomy after Vicki was born? Did I miss something when she has two more children?

That was a great first Chapter day you wrote in this new series. I like how you've expanded the characters of Josh, Jenny, Sarah and Amanda in the first Chapter. I also like how the girls came to Josh to ask him to impregnated either Sarah or Amanda and maybe both. I can hardly wait for the next chapter to see what you do with who is going to become pregnant between Amanda and Sarah?