All Comments on 'Jenny Ch. 01'

The building up of sexual tension was very good, then came the ulitmate climax. Awaiting chapter 2.

Await further episodes.

keep up the good work ...very interesting

You definitely need an editor, because your lack of proofreading detracts from what is otherwise a brilliant, sexy tale. Otherwise, I love it! Excellent buildup culminating in satisfying sex. But get an editor! =)

really turned on by this story. would love this to happen to my wife,I have watched whilst she has been fucked several times,but this story really stirs the imagination.

...with the comment ref using an editor. having said that, well... the story is hot, very hot. i could visualise the action. it certainly did the trick for me.

Intensely erotic, just spoiled by a few wee slips, like the spelling of clitoris. But very hot indeed, and mainly well-written.

Well written with deep understanding, more please?

Delirious what a great story. It is very erotic and well written. I was aroused while I read it. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Jeff

you got me hard

Great story, great descriptions really enjoyed this

Fabulous x

very hot, loved it.

You have a very creative and erotic style... keep writing!!

The Vicar is in the ante-room, awaiting his introduction and entrance. :+))

Loved the slow build up and the complete unknown desire she and Terry had for it!

Excellent delirious, I enjoyed this erotic story and your mind.

Really LOVE it, gave you a 5 (☆☆☆☆☆)!