All Comments on 'Jenny Ch. 01'

Really LOVE it, gave you a 5 (☆☆☆☆☆)!

Excellent delirious, I enjoyed this erotic story and your mind.

Loved the slow build up and the complete unknown desire she and Terry had for it!

The Vicar is in the ante-room, awaiting his introduction and entrance. :+))

You have a very creative and erotic style... keep writing!!

very hot, loved it.

Fabulous x

Great story, great descriptions really enjoyed this

you got me hard

Delirious what a great story. It is very erotic and well written. I was aroused while I read it. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Jeff

Well written with deep understanding, more please?

Intensely erotic, just spoiled by a few wee slips, like the spelling of clitoris. But very hot indeed, and mainly well-written.

...with the comment ref using an editor. having said that, well... the story is hot, very hot. i could visualise the action. it certainly did the trick for me.

really turned on by this story. would love this to happen to my wife,I have watched whilst she has been fucked several times,but this story really stirs the imagination.

You definitely need an editor, because your lack of proofreading detracts from what is otherwise a brilliant, sexy tale. Otherwise, I love it! Excellent buildup culminating in satisfying sex. But get an editor! =)

keep up the good work ...very interesting

Await further episodes.

The building up of sexual tension was very good, then came the ulitmate climax. Awaiting chapter 2.