by GoodEater
it was ok... i think it was a little detailed on the part about the neighbors letter, cuz i dont think that would EVER happen, but if you are very imaginative, than sure, it was good.. keep up the good work.
I thought it was a great story. I loved the way she got herself off on the couch, and the letter was a great touch. keep up the good work.
Can you tell what happened next sounds very interesting