All Comments on 'Jen's Journey'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Bold

A bit extreme the ending, I always take with caution the brainwashing stuff, but the overall is great.

Don't wait too long for the next piece. ;)

-Onkana

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This is perfect

I would love this. The brainwashing and the pierced chastity are so sexy. I wish I could go visit the farm.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Not wanting to be pedantic, but shouldn't the 1st tattoo have been "A's" to show possession. Liked the story and well written, but would haver preferred for the ending to have been a detailed description of her 1st "post destruction" session. The postscript was good, but maybe details of further changes made to her i the 5 years would have made sense.

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