All Comments on 'Jeong Park's First Frosh Ball Ch. 03'

Ah well, Chloe, you did warn your reader.

Even so, I did think the N, U, G and H keys received a bit of an excessive workout.

Still, at least the range of stories you produce does include sweet ones as well as this one with young girls who accept the role of being merely playthings for boys.

I wouldn't have read it if you hadn't been the author so I didn't score it.

Lue

Thanks Lue. Got to work on those synonyms. Reading thru again, yes, agree. Have to work on that for the next installment. One of those stories that I have to get out of my head to let me work on other ones.

Love your stories couldn't wait to read this chapter are there other chapters to your other stories coming as well?

Love this series, and I think its your best stories. I'm hanging out for part 4 :)

Part 4 just submitted. Should be up for the weekend with a bit of luck ... Chloe

Is Erik a mind-controller? The ladies appear to act like they have no choice about doing whatever he "asks" them to do.

I'm not complaining, really. Your writing is great. It's just that if you'd put this story as-is in the Mind Control category, with no elaboration added, I don't think anyone would have questioned it.

No, he's just one of those totally hunky guys that has the ability to charm the panties of every girl he meets. You run into them every now and then - all the girls, even the ones you swear are icicles, just melt and the guys are all jealous of them.... no mind control here, and wait until you see what Jeong does with him in the end .... Chloe

How sad to learn (from your posted comment) that Erik is not altogether the product of your fertile imagination. How sad to think that you know (or is it perhaps just that you know of) such narcissistic sociopaths? I am glad that you’ve given us the assurance that Jeong ultimately lays him low.

Characteristically excellent writing.

Phenomenal sorry. Excellent bad guy, excellent hot sexy desirable girls. Although I’ve known a few that lived a gang bang, I’ve known more dickwads like Erik. I’ve never quite understood, why the bad boy jerkoffs have such an attraction to the sett and innocent girls. But it is realistic in that sense. On to the remaining story…

why do you have that innocent asian girl in your profile pic ?

its complete opposite of your personality chloe

i mean you definitely are a wild asian girl with white fetish

or maybe you are a white guy with yellow fetish?

why are all asian girls in your stories just mere plaything for bad white boys and why none of them have some spine and free will and hopefully some working braincells