All Comments on 'Jeremy's Fall'

by TheOrchid

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jiskittenjiskittenover 13 years ago
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Where are you Orchid? We need you to come back and write more like this.

corpusconferocorpusconferoabout 14 years ago
Mmmmmm

Loved it! Wow, see? I'm a speachless, bumbling idiot now, hahaha. Well done :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Very well-written

Brilliant use of language and sentence structure - particularly the repetition of 'Sick. Sick. Sick.'

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Perfection

This is one of my favorite stories on here. As many times as I've read it (Dozens), I still feel the same arousal I felt the first time I came across it.

Perfection.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hardcore!

That was the best, most erotically detailed description of morgue-love I've ever read! Extremely sexy. That is, if you go for that sort of thing. Hee-hee!

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