by jaysmusings
I love these stories and I love Jess, her wanton acceptance of everything that happens is perfect. Keep going!
I know you needed a way for Aiden to see what Jess was doing, but the video kind of took me out of the story. I doubt someone of Nigel's status and power would be so brazen to send what is essentially, a rape video to the victim. I like the stories, and this was the first time I was taken out of it by a device to carry the plot. I look forward to seeing more of Jess' debauchery, and hope Nigel and his colleagues get theirs in the end for making Aiden a laughing stock at work, he didn't deserve that, I don't think.
I really enjoyed the series, but felt it needed another chapter to see how far it's going to go. Will he divorce the cheating (now company) slut?
I assume the vids will be sent to a lawyer and used to destroy the company and such?
Great series of stories - hoping you continue with more chapters, cheers.
I like the story.... I would tell Jess; you saw the video and ask her if she wants it to continue or have them all removed? The way you can get rid of them is to contact the head of the stockholders and ask them if you showed the video to the FBI what would happen to their stock price. This could make a interesting point to your story. Please do more.
sadistic bull. husand should have gone to police. all 4 participants should be in prison!
A twisted fantasy. At least I hope so. I don't really believe there are women out there who would do it in reality, even if it is a fantasy. Everyone wants some sort of control, I that was taken away from Jess. If she really wants multiple men, she can have them and control them. She has what they want, and she could make the rules.
This story started so well... but this Chap. 6 took a direction that is just too extreme..
Jess sounds great and without this sadistic extremism this could have developed into a great sequence