by potatoHead42
This will be very good if it doesn't turn into the inevitable cheating.
You might try a bit more of a traditional format with paragraphs and dialog.
Jess assured him, "It was just to get the viewers hooked! Don't worry about it, babe."
Very fun side series. I was skeptical at first but I really enjoyed he appearances of younger versions of characters we are already familiar with.
Do you plan to incorporate a first-hand telling of Jess' corruption and pushing of boundaries by her employer, like you have with Lana? If not, it makes me wonder whether Jess is even being corrupted or whether she is perfectly comfortable with her employer's expectations.
>Tomh1966
Appreciate the comment! The themes are definitely cheating related too, so I have to warn you already. About the "traditional" style of writing... English is my third language, so I grew up writing like this, it's very hard for me to change it after so long. I will see if I can figure it out tho, thanks :D
>JDWriterReader
Thanks! Yeah, I just wanted something to have a little bit of fun with. I'm not sure I will take it the same path as Lana, I was thinking to do that with the husband, since you noticed that Jess is not actually being corrupted, she is more at ease, while her husband will be the target. Hope it makes sense. Thanks again!
Love it!
Love the reversal of it here. Enjoy the the idea of it being about Willy being cucked. Want more of this very soon!
Regards
L