All Comments on 'Jessie Ch. 14 Pt. 01'

by TheStoryTeller2342

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ShadowRosieShadowRosieabout 4 years ago

Too bad there was very little Jessie in this episode. Not sure what I think about Sienna, she's a little too slave for my thinking.

TheStoryTeller2342TheStoryTeller2342about 4 years agoAuthor

Thanks for commenting.

I don’t know if you’ve read Messy yet, but a lot of Sienna’s mindset is explained in that book. She’s grown in the 3-4 years since that book takes place, she’s not manipulative, she’s not topping from the bottom (or trying not to) but she’s always wanted to belong to someone and she falls into that role easily.

Jessie is very much the same way, but needs less...protecting.

Interesting fact: The story was originally named Sienna because she drives all the action for all 23 chapters. None of the story happens without her showing up on Gary’s porch one summer night. I changed it to Jessie because... you’ll see.

Thanks again for reading and responding. I appreciate it. :-)

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