All Comments on 'Jess's Indiscretion'

Wrong category

The writing was not good and the story was not endearing, and so I gave up after the first two pages.

Yay…Jess is back!

To RePhil….Literotica has always included long-term girlfriends and fiancées in the Loving Wives category.

Thanks for your tags 1☆ without reading the story hopefully they all died slow painful deaths.

Not sure why he set her up? I think if she just asked she would have done it.

Stupid story.

Agree with RePhil. Wrong category. Why do authors always post fetish trash in Loving Wives?

Way too many time line shifts, way too many characters, and wrong category. Sorry: 2*

Fetish? 1*

I liked it. Nice build up. Definitely erotica. The problem with the Loving Wives category are the lunatics who think stories are real and somehow non-erotic stories like the wife fucking someone and how they went about getting revenge is the only definition of "Loving Wives" - totally not realizing there's nothing "loving" in that act.

Plumbr31 minutes ago

To RePhil….Literotica has always included long-term girlfriends and fiancées in the Loving Wives category.

Doesn't mean it is right that idiots cannot figure out the correct catagory. If there not a wife, then they are not a loving or hateful wife. Wrong catagory. In this case it is Erotic Couplings, They are not married, not divorced, they can't divorce, they can only break up. Duh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Poorly thought out, badly constructed and badly written. And I disagree with the category.

To Plumbr. No they have not. They don't screen for correct categorization. People post to the wrong group on purpose. It is called trolling to get others riled up for kicks and giggles.

Couldn't get past the third paragraph, childish writing about a slut.

fantastic you've decided to continue with this gem.. my only disappointment is just how it was so easy for zach .. wish there was more buildup and coercion.. hope it will come in next when the real fucking happens.. thanks

Loved it!

Well done and well played. 5 stars for the fun twists and turns and how well you had the characters play each other. Fine entertainment. Cheers

Very boring and long winded.

5 stars. Love the buildup. Can't wait for more. Maybe I should start writing again myself...