All Comments on 'Jewel Ch. 01'

You use seen when you should use saw, multiple times.

The story is very relateable, especially for girls. Yes, there is a double standard. Dad's often hope their sons are more successful than they had been, even with the ladies.

You have set the stage for subsequent events, which will initially not include mom.

Parallel to this are we readers awaiting said events,

very good story, but again one of those to short and multiple chapters story, make those chapters longer do not stop every time there is an other sexual position

thx

1 for going absolutely nowhere.