All Comments on 'Jill Kelly Goes To Prison Ch. 1 & 2'

by deputy duffy

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Wise_ManWise_Manover 17 years ago
Very nice

Very good start and i hope it gets better and better

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
GREAT

fantastic story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
yummy!

Damn,that was hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

You're using all the wrong adjectives "she groaned" instead of simply a "she said"

It stops me from being able to immerse myself in your story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Please learn sentence structure & punctuation.

I could not get past the first page due to "English as a 2nd language"

ptebadenptebadenalmost 8 years ago
Dificult resding but hot story

Very hot

Scott274Scott274about 4 years ago
Wrong section.

This should be posted in Lesbian Sex section.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

"...a vanilla envelope". I know a lot of people prefer chocolate, but vanilla is my favorite envelope flavor too.

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