All Comments on 'Jill Kelly Goes To Prison Ch. 1 & 2'

by deputy duffy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

"...a vanilla envelope". I know a lot of people prefer chocolate, but vanilla is my favorite envelope flavor too.

Scott274Scott274about 4 years ago
Wrong section.

This should be posted in Lesbian Sex section.

ptebadenptebadenalmost 8 years ago
Dificult resding but hot story

Very hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Please learn sentence structure & punctuation.

I could not get past the first page due to "English as a 2nd language"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

You're using all the wrong adjectives "she groaned" instead of simply a "she said"

It stops me from being able to immerse myself in your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
yummy!

Damn,that was hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
GREAT

fantastic story!

Wise_ManWise_Manalmost 18 years ago
Very nice

Very good start and i hope it gets better and better

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