by hoover789
Mr. Nice Guy gone Hoover!! But this story is HOT, and kinda funny. I loved it! I think you've got Jill in a perfect place... Slutty, Needy, and Accepting! And I like the marriage ruse... I also like how you dress her up and detail her outfits!!
High on the fun to read score … Though not sure about the sense of the plot. Seems he has a good thing going with a once in a million kind sub …. Why does he intent to destroy it ? …. Is it a sceptics view of life: Good things -or relationships- just don’t last long enough for any ‚forever happily afterwards‘ ?
Thanks, Strappy. It's always good to hear from you.
To anon. I think the story reflects the old adage. The two tragedies in life. The first is not getting everything you want and the second is getting everything you want. I think this applies to Bob.
I liked Jill´s degradation and destruction in the preceeding parts very much. But with this episode I develop pity for her troubles and start to wish the old bastard could find his peace with her in privacy and would stop sharing her with others.