by sh3270
She’s turning into the town mattress. UTI’s, STD’s, not to mention no one likes or respects the mattress and you want us to believe that’s erotic? No offence man; but this is about as erotic as a yeast infection.
not sure how much longer this sham of a marriage continues since she's turned into a complete slut. Her delusion that she loves her husband is a joke. Everyone's going to have STD's before too long.
Not as interesting as the first two entries in this series. Only 3 stars for this one. P.S. When is Jake finally going to give Jilly a genuine spanking?
Dr beulahthemick; I wondered how long it would be before the likes of Whackdoodle turned up, look if you do not like a woman getting it on with her husband's approval, bug off and read something else.
Is anybody actually married in this junk? Wrong category. poorly conceived and badly written.
Ahhh more repressed homosexuality between the writer and his weak fan base. That closet must be a death trap by now if theres ever a fire.
Typical white whore with stereotypical LW Jamal who naturally owns that white cunt. Lame, silly, stereotypical ir/cuck garbage.
Someone must have passed this story around their prayer group, the prudes are out in force. I gave you 5 stars but only to offset the cucks who are lowballing you. An editor would do wonders for your story.
John , Jake , Jay and Jillian ? You obsessed with J or something? Work me in there my names Jim lol
OP does a great job following what one commenter referred to as the Cuckold Writers' Checklist. These stories are so homogenous and identical that this fact is proof positive that these truly belong in the Fetish category. More like a refugee from Penthouse Letters, circa 1985, than an actually story. Needs an edit, too. 2/5
crossed my fingers hoping for another chapter. darn. still good to re-read though.