All Comments on 'Jills Fantasy Comes True'

after I learned to masturbate---I have grown up but it brought back a pleasant memory.

...and he couldn't even be bothered to punctuate THAT correctly. When "writers" can't use decent grammar or punctuation when they type in their own story description, I don't bother reading the story. I just come here to award the "writer" what he deserves -- ZEROS.

Great story and theme.......ignore previous stupid punctuation comment....Is this an English course? What an idiot!

I will have to check more of your stories...........