All Comments on 'Jill's Game'

Thanks for the read.

Well written and very arousing. Thank you.

Well written and an enjoyable read, interested to read more about their little game

I loved it. Have always wanted to find the right woman to dom me. Looking forward to the next chapter.

A good read. Slow build up and nice character development. Waiting for next chapter.

Most appetizing story I've read in a while. I was quite surprised by my reaction to this!

Keep it up!

Very good, a slow build up and nice to get to know what she was doing and going to do slowly.

Very well done. 5-star worthy. Not exactly my thing, but you successfully pulled me into that space. I do agree with the comment that it is probably not in the right category, which probably resulted in lower ranking that it deserves.

VERY SEXY AND EROTIC STORY

The thoughts of giving up control to a woman is very enticing. Fun read.

EROTIC MASOCHIST

I was expecting her to smother him with her creampied pussy. Maybe that will happen in a later story.