Jill's Secret Ch. 03

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"No little dog you'll be wearing that thing for at least 24 hours. And that's if you're really good for me. Now ignore your cock and pay attention to me."

With that, she started fucking my mouth faster her balls smacking hard against my chin. I grunted and moaned around her thrusting meat while I worked my fingers in and out of her holes. My eyes met hers and she smiled. After several more hard thrusts she slammed her cock down my throat and groaned loudly as her thick creamy load filled my stomach. She held me in place until every drop had been deposited in my belly then slid her softening penis from my mouth. I eased my fingers from her pussy and ass and was led back into the house.

We returned to our bed where Jill removed the leash and set it on the night stand before pulling me into her arms and pressing my head to her breast. Her other hand grabbed the big soft comforter and pulled it over us. Minutes later we both drifted off to sleep.

I was awakened sometime later by Jill dragging me out of bed with my leash. She quickly led me to the bathroom so I could hold her cock while she peed. Before I could give her cock my usual kiss she grabbed the back of my head and forced my face into the bowl. Holding me in place I felt her kneel behind and begin to feed her hard dick into my ass. I moaned as she filled me with her meat.

Jill thrust into me hard enough to force my face into the yellow toilet water. "Drink it doggo!" she growled as she fucked me. She held my face in the water and I realized I needed to drink quickly before I ran out of air. I opened my mouth wide and let the piss water fill my mouth over and over until I had drunk enough that my nose was clear and i could breathe. Once I had taken a couple of breaths, Jill pushed my face back into the water forcing me to drink more all the while her cock pounded my asshole. She repeated this until I had drunk most of what was in the toilet then filled my ass with her cum.

Jill's cock slid from my ass and she led me back to the bedroom after washing my face off. Snuggled back under the covers again she gently stroked my face and explained that from now on I would be drinking her piss either from the toilet or right from the source. I lay silently processing this new development until I flicked my tongue over her nipple showing my agreement to her demand. She patted my cheek lovingly and told me what a good boy I was before falling asleep. I lay awake for another hour or so listening to her breathe and wondering how much more I would be forced to give her.

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chris2kchris2kalmost 2 years ago

How can cp 3 go downhill that fast .1 an 2 were great .3 aweful

Ksjman125Ksjman125almost 2 years ago

I hate to be the broken record, but I agree that ch3 was just....... Don't even know. The first 2 ch were awesome sauce though was it just me or did you you not call Jill .... Denise?? For these kinds of stories with extreme BDSM you just needed to add the warning intro as everyone else does and the tags need to match as well. Because there was no indication at all.... Then you avoid the negative reviews and rants bc they were warned ahead of time. The writing and all that aspect was great and getting better indeed. Keep it up!

ShortyMacShortyMacalmost 2 years ago

I was disappointed with chapter 3. I’m sorry but I’m not into BDSM, Golden Showers. I gave it a rating if 3 stars. I loved how the first 2 chapters went in chapter 3 I could have accepted a bit of Jill controlling of him. Just not as far as you took it. 😵‍💫😳

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

STARTED GREAT .c. 03 ,NOPE

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Sadist crap, there's no longer any love between them. What kind of sick psycho gets off on cruelty?

totostorytotostoryover 3 years ago
The story till ch.02 were great

I liked the story till ch.02 , especially Jill transformation while she fucked him ( from romantic fuck to dominate rough fuck from Jill ) the dialogues an thrash talking were great when Jill made him submit to her, I think she explored the dominate during sex time, however I was preferring it was going to be like that in ch.03 (switch between romantic slow fuck to rough fuck only during fuck) , but it looked like alien capture Jill in Ch.03 where the character transformed completely to be another person (very Sadistic gross person) ,sorry dude but Ch.03 it`s like a whole different story ,I was so disappointed cause I expected more from such a good writer like you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This is so good!

It’s so hard to find stories like these, please make more

EmirusEmirusabout 6 years ago

I read the first two chapters of this story before reading this third instalment so that I could understand the story and be in a better position to comment.

The first thing to say is that in the 3 plus years in between the first two and this one the storytelling has definitely improved.

The relationship between Jill and Jerry (why did you choose these names? Sounds like cartoon characters) has changed very much since they first met and what appeared to be going to be a loving relationship has turned into something very different and to some extent unclear.

It seems as if you keep changing the direction of the story as it goes along rather than having the beginning, middle and end in your mind before writing the story and then joining up the dots.

Dismissing how she became a futa (which was silly) it’s perfectly acceptable that she has had a latent reaction to how she was possibly treated when she was the skinny girl with the boyish appearance. Incidentally why do writers make every futa so big and with a huge cock? It’s fantasy but it would be nice to see a bit more imagination in the description sometimes.

The ending of chapter 2 was perfectly acceptable but this chapter has given me a dilemma because the change from 2 to 3 was so dramatic. Instead of someone with a latent dominant personality we seem to have got someone with dissociative identity disorder. Is she a cruel sadistic sociopath or a lover who is a dominant because she enjoys it for herself but also because she enjoys making him happy because he likes playing the submissive? Perhaps I’m looking into it too deeply because after all it is fantasy?

But the main question to ask is: did I enjoy it? On the whole the answer is yes. Does it make me want to put it on my favourite’s list so I don’t miss the next instalment? No. I can’t give it a 5 but I think it is worth 4⭐️ It certainly more than than the 3.23 it’s got at the time of writing this comment.

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