All Comments on 'Jill's XXXmas Adventure Ch. 01'

A little too quick getting to the sex, but the descriptions of the sex draw attention away from that.

I couldn't decide if they were fucking or making love. It was still a good story that overall I enjoyed, and I'll be watching for Chapter 2 and Dad.

A great start. I hope you keep going.

awesome story love the writing it was brilliant./ reading this was like.

watching it taking place right before my eyes. cant wait to read the next part of this very exciting hot horny story. do hope there more.

It was a good story, but you had 4 or 5 placed where you used than when it should have been then. Spell checkers won't catch this, you might look for an editor.

i loved it ...mainly because it reminded me when i fucked my sister....who looked similar to yourself....and how she sucked my cock for the first time.....it was awesome,you told the story so well it brings back so many good times.....we still fuck now and again and have done for the last 5 years(she is now24) and it has got even better.we have even had a threesome with her girlfriend.I thank you for the story ,and look forward to more of your adventures....my cock is still standing to attention,so you acheived the objective.keep it up ....if you know what i mean lol

I am a big fan of incest and this story is nicely written. Pacing is good with enough detail in sex scenes to be enjoyable without being clinical. Can't wait to read next 2 chapters.

If you had kept it strictly for Jill and Jeff alone without her wanting to fuck her dad too, it would have been a 5 star effort in spite of being too short. But since you ruined it, I gave you a 1/5.