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Anonymousabout 5 years agoThe fuck did I just read?
Have you seen a therpist recently? This story makes no sense at all. Might have a disorder.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoYou are either brilliant or insane!
I vote for brilliant. This was a pastiche, a farce. Very well done, because in a farce things keep happening which couldn't really be happening and you never know if it's real or not. Most readers will be confused.
R.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoPastiche? Interesting.
Pastiche? OK.
Part 1 = Woody Allen.
Part 2 = (auto)Biography.
Part 3 = The Third Policeman, by Brian O'Nolan, or films by David Lynch.
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