All Comments on 'Jim's Legacy Pt. 1 Mina 03'

Not really digin' mina's story. Hopefully you write Book of Wade. I think you have a chance at doing something great with the nephilim persecution you mentioned in jim's story. Action packed, suspenseful, tragedy & triumph, struggles, character growth, basically an epic story.

i like it and wonder if she will find other supernaturals for her poly life.

that I wasn't going to like this story as much as the last 'Jim' story but, this last chapter has 'started' to make a believer out of me. Guess it was a slow start. I am a strong believer in character development. It's not nessessary to have a sex scene in every chapter. Good plot and character development are far more important. If half the chapter is devoted to a sex scene without any build up it doesn't really fit the story. IF this is strictly a stroke story......you have too much plot going and you need to add far more unbelievable sex scenes.

As always, these are just my opinions. Your mileage may vary.