All Comments on 'Joan of Snark Ch. 07'

by Morgan_Ellis

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LostYouthLostYouthover 4 years ago
Excellent Chapter

Like the way the story is developing, (Not to much of the supernatural) I hope Joan and Lil meet again in person.

Morgan_EllisMorgan_Ellisover 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thanks so much for the feedback! Yes, there should be another meeting between Joan and Lil in a later chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Re your comment LostYouth

I’d say there’s plenty of the supernatural going on in this story, all the clues are there.

“Lil” and her ex b/f “Adam”, the priest being referred to as “Bub”, the symbolism of the birds and the nighttime succubus visitation.

Interesting read, I’m glad you’re using the biblical supernatural approach as opposed to just a kinky priest.

Tess (UK)

Morgan_EllisMorgan_Ellisover 4 years agoAuthor
Anonymous 11/25/19

Glad someone noticed, LOL! Thanks for your comment Tess!

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