by Morgan_Ellis
Like the way the story is developing, (Not to much of the supernatural) I hope Joan and Lil meet again in person.
Thanks so much for the feedback! Yes, there should be another meeting between Joan and Lil in a later chapter.
I’d say there’s plenty of the supernatural going on in this story, all the clues are there.
“Lil” and her ex b/f “Adam”, the priest being referred to as “Bub”, the symbolism of the birds and the nighttime succubus visitation.
Interesting read, I’m glad you’re using the biblical supernatural approach as opposed to just a kinky priest.
Tess (UK)
Glad someone noticed, LOL! Thanks for your comment Tess!