by Quietoldie
My advise would be to give up. I love a good cuckold story but it has to be written better than a 10 yr. can write.
Wife turns hubby intocpanty wearing cuckold. That's it one star.
The dialog sounds like middle school writing.
You've done a very good job telling this story in a measured manner that gradually builds up the characters and felt real to me. It's good that she doesn't start out as a strong dominant but steadily recognizes both her needs and her capabilities.
Why would anyone answer the phone in such a rude manner? Especially to a potential client? That makes no sense. Likewise, why wouldn’t HE take assertiveness training? Why can’t he stand up for himself?
Sorry but at that point, I just stopped reading as it was evident that you are writing about an effeminate and ineffective male who probably voted Democrat and supports Title IX until his son is accused of raping a girl at a party and wondering how this happened? Meanwhile your daughter has turned to stripping because she’s got serious daddy issues after being with this waste of skin for 18 years who couldn’t lead flies to shit.
I liked it, it wasn't your best, but it was hot and erotic. Coleen signs up, she gets to experiment and so does hubby. it is hard to get more imaginative than that.
Nice story, not the greatest character development or realistic set up. But exciting for cuckold and femdom writing.
By the way, I LOVE that you posted it here in loving wives just to irritate the trolls that live to write trash about authors. I hope this will frustrate them even more!!
Keep it up
A person posting negative comments because they don't like a story does not make that person a hater. However, slamming others for the "sin" of having a different opinion from yours most definitely makes YOU a hater.
another second rate cucktail for the low-T set.
personally, I'd rather read tea leaves.
A good depiction of wasted biomass, just itching to be recycled into something useful. Can't believe they had children. That was just rude to civilization.
Thanks for contributing your best efforts.
"Voted Democrat" and supports title 9 (but thoughtfully uses the Roman numerals IX).
Could you be stupider? I think not. Go buy a gravesite and dig the hole. Your brain is already dead.
Wow! Someone really upset the cuckettes here. Careful girls, your crocodile tears will rust your cages.
Simply a sad story. Without being all moralistic, this isn’t a “loving wife” story. Tran, bdsm, etc I get it for someone’s fetish fiction, but how do you get a loving couple out of that?!?
Great story and very well-written! I hope this is just the beginning.
How stupid can she be? She videos her infidelity. That will play well for her husband in divorce court wherein he'll keep 80% of their marital assets and she'll leave with her maiden name. Ridiculous story.
1 star
Wow this is a very hot story. I have fantasized about this kind of relationship. I hope in the next chapter she has him eat her boyfriend's creampie from her pussy.
I thought the story was reasonably thought out, flowed well, and easy to understand. I don't think it was ridiculous at all. It could use a 2nd chapter, after all, it was hubby's idea in the first place, and most of the narration was about the wife.
You could put this into an age group if there was one. I wouldn't expect a 30 to 40 year old would appreciate it as much as the ones that where in their age group, let alone understand it. There is so much that can develop from here. I had a thought when it came time to do the deed, she would back out, but that didn't happen.
This story HAS A LOT OF NONSENSES AND MISTAKES in it!First of all,IT’S DEFINITELY NOT TRUE that “the chickens in the hen coop are all female”!This IS A HUGE NONSENSE!THERE IS ALWAYS A MALE,THE COCK OR THE ROOSTER in the hen coop together with the female chicken(sometimes THERE ARE EVEN TWO OR MORE ROOSTERS)!Then,IT’S NOT TRUE AT ALL that “once she's had black she'll never go back”!This is BULLSHIT and A VERY STUPID SAYING(if there is REALLY such a saying at all)!THERE ARE PLENTY OF WOMEN who GO BACK TO WHITE MEN after they were with black men!The author SHOULD BE AT LEAST A LITTLE REALISTIC and STOP WAISTING OUR TIME with SUCH NONSENSES,So,YES,THIS IS AN ABSOLUTE RIDICULOUS STORY,as this type of CRAPPY CUCKOLD STORIES always are!The story IS NEVER “reasonably thought out”,as somebody says,but ABSOLUTELY HAPHAZARDUOUS!
Also,I MUST STRONGLY DISAGREE with someone who said in a comment that “you could put this into an age group if there was one.I wouldn't expect a 30 to 40 year old would appreciate it as much as the ones that where in their age group,let alone understand it”!This is SIMPLY RIDICULOUS!EVERYONE WOULD UNDERSTAND THIS STORY,NO MATTER OF THE AGE,just like EVERYONE WHO LIKES THAT KIND OF STORIES WOULD APPRECIATE,again NO MATTER OF THEIR AGE!ONE DOESN’T HAVE TO BE IN ANY “AGE GROUP” in order to understand and appreciate a story!Therefore,THERE IS ABSOLUTELY NO NEED for this story to be put “into an age group” and,anyway,THERE AREN’T “AGE GROUPS” on this site!Besides,the couple who appears in this story ARE EXACTLY BETWEEN 30 AND 40 YEARS OLD,so ANYONE WHO IS OF THAT AGE UNDERSTANDS PERFECTLY THE STORY!Some people SHOULD REALLY THINK before writing SUCH CRAP!
The biggest error here is the writer (and by extension) believing a woman who does this TO her husband actually loves him.
Make no mistake, there is no love there, other than someone who views her husband as an obedient pet and NOTHING more.
Ignore the haters -- this story is FANTASTIC !!! It's exactly what I want for me and my wife. I want to wear panties (and nylons, bra, skirt, nightie, high heels, etc.). I want her to get fucked by other men and I want to watch (being there in person live would be better than watching the video afterwards). I definitely want to be my wife's cuckold. I will please her orally any time she wants, I will have her fuck my man-pussy with her big strap-on and I don't want to put my penis in her cunt -- because I'm a sissy faggot cocksucker who will worship and serve my wife.
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
You know it's going to be a shit story not worth reading. This garbage shouldn't even be allowed to be posted.
Reading only the title and descriptive line for such stories as this one causes two questions to arise:
1. Is this the lifestyle the writer lives and wants?
2. Is this the lifestyle the writer seeks?
Thankfully, neither apply to me and thus I REFUSE to even attempt to read such stories.
Very exciting. I am a lucky man. My wife hasn't yet taken a boyfriend, but she insists I wear panties and nighties to bed. She only allows me full intercourse once a year, but on other very special occasions she will allow me inside for one minute without any orgasm that night. I am allowed an erection a week, and one orgasm a month, always into my panties, often an inch away from her open vagina. Her favourite is to make me wait for weeks, so that I am able to squirt without an erection. She has two orgasms a week, from my tongue, fingers, or usually, her vibrator, which she likes to remind me is twice the size of my small penis. This is the best sex we have both ever had - unless we can find her a boyfriend!
Even weak men have their limits and she just crossed his - time for a divorce and to lert the kids pay for their own education if they want one. Laughably bad