All Comments on 'Joanne's Story Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Probably should have read the Ginny and Jon series first, though I doubt this would have helped me figure out who the heck Jim (third paragraph) was. Nearly gave up at that point as it was starting to look like an orgy.

Glad I persevered even though I thought this was the weaker of the three parts. Maybe the outcome was a little too predictable. An enjoyable read nevertheless.

JaneThomasJaneThomasover 4 years agoAuthor
Jim

Lol, bad typo missed by every edit I did. Thanks for commenting

AnyMooseAnyMooseabout 4 years ago
And?

Please don't leave us hanging...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Who the heck is Kate?

(in the 7th paragraph).

... and what happened with Jon and Ginny? Did they lose the baby or something?

This is a confusing end. What did Chris bring to the story? I don't see any reason for him, other than the weirdness of him walking into a room that has three (?) people sleeping in the same bed. Just strange to me.

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