All Comments on 'Johanna and Maxine Pt. 04'

I am really enjoying this series, Shaima, much of the pleasure coming from trying to second-guess the characters and their tangles of relationships, particularly the uncertainty of both Maxine and Johanna. Quite a surprise for Maxine to discover the supposedly true-blue Mark playing away in a car-park. Should make it easier for Maxine to ditch him following her weeks of indecision on how to approach the problem. Once again, simply a very good five-star tale.

After a slow start the story has sprung to life in this chapter. I look forward to reading the rest.

I love reading your work. I'm always torn between reading right away and waiting for more so I'm not left wondering. This is a prime example of the latter. I'm very excited for more.

Lying ...... Tell me lies sweet little lies, a famous eighties song and so true, but lies breaking hearts ...... And a person doesnt change her personality, so a ex is ex or it will hurt a little later down the road ...... And maxine, being a lamb in a lions cage, getting hurt will last damn long

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