All Comments on 'Johnny Lee Wilson Ch. 01'

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clearedtofuckclearedtofuckalmost 4 years ago
Dad said he could tell him anything...

I hope he tells Dad what is really going on and that at the very least, Julie and he have a committed relationship. As for the sister, that will solve itself.

buzman0112buzman0112almost 4 years ago
Great Story

You are an excellent writer and not only was this story well thought out and written, it was quite engaging and I thoroughly enjoyed it!!! Please write more chapters soon!!!

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticover 1 year ago

I didn't like or dislike this chapter. What surprises me is that he was faithful to a very disappointing girlfriend and now, he is willing to "be" with another woman when he seems to be in a "steady" relationship with at least two women. But it shouldn't surprise me. ¿Is he really in a steady relationship with them or aren't they mere fuck buddies so it wouldn't be cheating? It is what I don't like about this story, how casually the sex is treated... There will likely be more sex partners for all of them. This kind of story about fuck buddies isn't precisely among my favorite erotic fiction. This story is about taboo relationships, which I like, but it's much more about lust than romance, which I dont like.

RanDog025RanDog025over 1 year ago

Good story, Thanks! Another 5 Big FAT STARS!

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