All Comments on 'Joining Ali and Violet'

Great Story. I think it needs a reprise.

I've read a few of your stories and liked most of them. This seemed like a fantasy that was waiting for a story and characters to fill it. I guess it seemed like a porn movie... where the actors sleepwalk through a scene up until the point where the sex starts. Then you get the payoff ... that is if you're into big breasts and big penises and the women screaming in a monotone and looking off stage left for what the director wants them to do next.

I'm overstating by a lot, but it did feel uninspired.

I do not look at it like the anonymous just before me.

I do not get why he considers it blah.

I've been reading Literotica for years and thousands of stories.

I do not remember reading this plot (I admit to having a good forgetter).

I've read Lesbians borrowing a guy to have a baby.

In one such story, the single guy is lonely, so his lesbian friends, being parents of the baby he helped provide him, rewarded him with regularly sheduled sex, which met his need for 1) sex,

2) female companionship (all three were good friends), and,

3) some time with his/their baby.

I wish I could remember the title for you, as it was a great story.

Anyway, JamesSD's story is unique in that what both the girls desire from him is a live dick, rather than the artificial ones they already have.

Not paternity.

Not companionship (which they already have with each other).

Not a provider/protector.

Just the physical part that their partner cannot provide,

but a male can.

For the unique idea,

plus the competent telling:

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Paul in Oklahoma