All Comments on 'Joining the Pack Ch. 08'

by SkuldTheNorn

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Even better

I love, love, love this story. I love that Kaev and Anahid are true mates, but I do not like the concept of them sharing themselves with others. Thank you for writing this, it is AMAZING!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
grrr

your writing is amazing, but I also do not like ghis direction of swapping/ sharing, one of the key premises of mates is that once you have found your true mate you do not want anyone else, and this seems to violate that premise which makes werewolf stories so special...

tjdhall2tjdhall2about 3 years ago

Yes, in total agreement with how well the development of the main characters but dont have them sharing and swapping mates, that is a very very very bad idea

evonnaevonnaalmost 3 years ago

this is an interesting chapter... i don't find Kaev's comments about letting Varick touch her to be about him actually being ok with it, or really seriously planning it... i saw it as him testing her reactions to what he's saying ..... firstly, to see whether she shares the attraction Varick feels for her, so he's checking what she's been feeling when he's been gone.... and secondly, he seems to be asserting his dominance and power over her, or his pack leader status, by suggesting he is able to make the bringing Varick into it happen .... maybe also seeing how she'll react to that.... it's all quite naughty in a dark way.... pretty hot to me ..... (i wouldn't usually go for anything messing the strength of the mate bond, but Varick is written in a very likeable way... he is a nice 'rival of sorts' to Kaev.... i write this having read later chapters also.... and Kaev isn't always such a 'great guy' character at all...) ... Kaev seems to relish in the fact that he's got her, she is his, and other men, like Varick, want her badly.... he's the top dog with a very hot female.... but also there was definitely a hint of jealousy there as well, i think.... ... i was thinking how he's been alive for a long time.... and he's had a chance to have and see a lot of sex and hone and add to his 'preferences' :) for quite a while.... so maybe this type of show of power turns him on.... as a virile alpha male :) ..... anyway, just my two cents..... loving this story, hope there'll be more soon! ..... xxx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I guess my views about monogamy have broadened over the years. As long as a committed couple are in agreement and want to bring a 3rd into play, I think it would be totally hot. Especially if it's Varick!

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My completed story Joining the Pack was my first foray into erotica and the werewolf genre. Next is the SciFi, more reluctance focused story: The Oathkeepers, about Zoe, a human captured by a race of aliens. I also have a story for the 2021 Halloween Contest: Of Witches and...

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