All Comments on 'Jolene's Momma Pt. 03'

After an amazing part 1 & 2 in the story. Part 3 was just a total let down in how it could have gone. Titling it Jolene's Momma you would have expected to see her more in the story Her taking Kristi as her slave.

Yes, I agree that the title suggested that Jolene's momma would play a larger role. The end was too sweet?

If that's what the 2 people wanted to do as I have married couple so be at yet this they stayed together and never took it out of the marriage gear story maybe you could do another series

Would love to read more stories about Brandi