All Comments on 'Jones Farm Savages Ch. 01'

I sure hope you are going to continue this great story. Well written, kept my interest and wanting more.

You need to continue with more chapters. Thanks

A beautiful story. You made the characters interesting and have a good story line. I like the way you write and will be looking for more chapters. 5 stars for your efforts. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I'm enjoying the characters and the story very well.

There is no incest, so this story, as mediocre as it is, is in the wrong section.

Sorry, but couldn't get into the story; too stilted and doesn't flow.

I couldn't make sense of some of what was written - what does "Thankfully she saw James in the eyes" mean?

Also if you don't return from leave you a DESERTER not a DEFECTOR

You need to read and reread your work then get an editor to check it with a dispassionate eye before submitting it.

Only worth a three ***.

I like your story, and noticed you haven't written anything since 09/2020. For those who didn't like it read something else.

Gave this 5 stars because it's a good story. But to me it's author has limited knowledge of the old west.

I did not think I would enjoy this story; not really interested in Old West fiction. I’m glad I continued with it. Thanks.